The same tone in the first two stories continues here, with the narrator well worn, but still surging forward towards some unseen promise of redemption. Will he manage to get people out of their houses and to safety? It’s not possible, but plausible. We meet a mother and daughter who seem more desperate than they look, and mom decides that our hero needs a little love. It’s a chiseled interior at this point, and we’re really only seeing what we need to see, it’s tight story that shows incredible discipline. There is the outside possibility of things getting stolen, wine bottles, art work, but the narrator discovers things are not at all what they seem. He rode in a horse who left him shit out of luck right away, and almost makes it impossible for him to get back to civilization. I don’t know where we’ll go from here, if we’ll see another point of view, or another level of collapse from a world that is clearly falling apart.
-JR
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